creative dialogue
...w was the Bronx? STEPHANIE: Fun, but we have some talking to do, Jerome. I met a guy down in- JEROME: What #$%*)!? STEPHANIE: Calm down, me and Deon got engaged last night, and he is coming down here tomorrow to get me. I’m gonna move back up to New York with him. JEROME: What?! I can’t believe you, you $@*$! Fine, %#)$@ your Eastside homeboy, do whatever you want, but he aint gonna live long if he comes down here. STEPHANIE: Don’t talk like that, Jerome. I know you’ll be fine. I’ll talk to you before we leave. JEROME: Whatever… [Jerome stomps off mad and runs to the rest of his gang. He tells the rest of his gang what his girlfriend did to him, and they offer to do whatever it takes to help him out to screw his x-girlfriend over.] JEROME: Aight, my Negroes. Tomorrow there is a fight, right here on the streets of L.A. The Eastside is going down! And that &)$# that stole my girlfriend, he’s gonna be the first to die. CLIFF: We’re wit yah, man, we’ll take those Eastsiders down tomorrow. JEROME: Thanks, man, you’re my best friend, Cliff. Don’t know what I’d do without you. SCENE III [Jerome and his gang got all their guns ready, and all of his gang hid on the street and waited for Stephanie’s new fiancé to arrive. Stephanie’s car pulls in with Deon in the passenger seat.] STEPHANIE: Hey, Jerome. I would like you to meet Deon. JEROME: What up? DEON: Hey, man, nice to meet you. Stephanie is a really great girl. JEROME: Yah, nice to meet you too. STEPHANIE: I’ll be right back, Deon. I just gotta get all the rest of my stuff out of my old house. [Stephanie goes inside to get her stuff, and Jerome and Deon are waiting outside…] JEROME: I just wanted to tell you something, Deon. DEON: Yah, what is it, man? JEROME: ...