assessment
...gn has no key question. In your third question, when you saw the definition of mistreatment, you should have realized that you needed to change your question and hypothesis, because in Afghanistan, women are not viewed as being mistreated. I am baffled as to what to put under new insight and ideas I have because of your presentation. This is because of two things. FIRSTLY, you went against everything I’ve ever heard about the “mistreatment” of women in Afghanistan. I have ALWAYS heard that their “mistreatment” is due to religious beliefs. Now you tell me that the reasons are political. Who should I believe? I should believe everything else I’ve heard because SECONDLY, you gave no valid sources in your presentation! Your evidence was not valid because you cited nothing credible. The things you listed as evidence very well could have happened, but we NEED to know where you found that information for us to consider it as valid information, especially with your topic. In your closing, you gave us a recap of your information. Therefore, it catches the main idea. You organized your info chronologically, but regardless of how you organize your info, it needs to flow better and tie together. You just began throwing facts out at us about how women were treated, and that had nothing to do with chronology because the way they are mistreated hasn’t changed. Your presentation was an oral report, so it wasn’t creative, but I can’t think of a better way to do it! Your activity involved most of the class, but you should have reasoned out that some of us are more vocal in the class than others, and you could never heard everybody’s opinion in 7 minutes. Your presentation method was appropriate for the topic. Your visual aids were easy to see, but next time hold your research design up longer. I would have kept everything the same, except when you were talking about the horrors of the mistreatment; I would have put the mistreatment photos up then. The aids showed us visually what you were tying to convey to us with words. Everybody seemed loud enough. It was decently easy to follo...