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Peer Edit Writer: Keisha Yarde Title of Piece: Persuasive Letter for Hope for the Family Crusade Peer Editor: Al Edey Date: 2 November 2003 Dear Keisha, Your persuasive letter to Mr. Dawson is commendable. Upon receiving this letter Mr, Dawson is quite likely to be minded to investigate the crusade. I have a few suggestions that may further encourage him to attend. Content You have described a number or situations which result in disrupted marriages an families. The situations are familiar and thus your reader can relate to them. You mention the time and days of the crusade, but since it is housed in a tent, I suspect that it is a temporary arrangement. Mr. Dawson would need to know the start date and the end date so that he can plan to attend accordingly.