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The essay entitled “ Motor Heads ” and written by a first year student named Ryan Porter is an excellent essay overall. The introduction is very well written because it prepares the reader to what the writer is going to talk about and the thesis, that states that there is different type of car-nuts, is accurate because it summarizes what the body of the essay contains. The arguments are well organized because the writer wrote each argument or each type of car-nuts precisely, in a paragraph of its own. Thus, for the four different types of car-nuts that the writer mentioned were four different paragraphs.